Girl put a warning before you PUNCH ME IN THE GUT π You captured the experience of being a writer so well. I often wonder how much of our extensive self-analysis really is just picking at a scab so we can bleed on the page π
Oh how I missed your comments, you have no idea πππ this is exactly it ! We keep poking at old wounds, or make new ones larger to create something beautiful out of it
marie, your writing has this resonating and hard-hitting quality that i just adore. this piece in particular reminds me of the relentless, all-consuming and accusatory thoughts one has during insomnia. iβm captivated!
It came very naturally ! Thank you for pointing that out, I love it when readers pay attention to details ! It's one of my favorite things when I write these π
this was very hard hitting, as your work often isβ¦but necessary. especially haunting was the imagery of feeling perfect because weβre not being seen.
3. For some reason I remembered a character from a book who goes to museums and temples only to utterly destroy every divine portrayal of herself (won't say more on that) ... this museum you oft mention now feels like a rage room to me. One where you would only want a sledgehammer and the freedom to tear it all down
4. Most impressive Marie, and you got me feeling some revulsion towards the narrator.. damn!
This is beautiful Marie! It feels like a subtle dig at the wellness and βself careβ industry. Or perhaps thatβs just my lens. Itβs haunting and true for so many people on this journey. Thank you for this! ππΎπ€
Girl put a warning before you PUNCH ME IN THE GUT π You captured the experience of being a writer so well. I often wonder how much of our extensive self-analysis really is just picking at a scab so we can bleed on the page π
Oh how I missed your comments, you have no idea πππ this is exactly it ! We keep poking at old wounds, or make new ones larger to create something beautiful out of it
I donβt even know what to say, Marie, this is incredible!!
Making you speechless is a great compliment π thank you Georgia !
Insanely well done
Aw, thanks Brooke ! π
Wow, well done
Thank you Aaryn π
"The museum of you is catching dust, overflowing yet eternally unfinished."
I have no words. I love you marie
Twirling my hair giggling kicking my feeeeeet π thanks gorgeous ! Ily too
βYou took yourself apart, brick by brick, and it all makes sense now. You make sense to yourself, congratulations !β
i have been called the hell out, i fear π° this was a beautiful piece as always, and i will not recover π₯²
Yup, I knew this one would sting since I hurt myself in the process too π thanks Stephanie π«Άπ»
God I adore you π©
Right back at you my darling ! π«Άπ»
marie, your writing has this resonating and hard-hitting quality that i just adore. this piece in particular reminds me of the relentless, all-consuming and accusatory thoughts one has during insomnia. iβm captivated!
I'm grateful, thank you very much ! π«Άπ»
thereβs something about your use of second person that adds a necessary layer to this piece. in awe!
It came very naturally ! Thank you for pointing that out, I love it when readers pay attention to details ! It's one of my favorite things when I write these π
this was very hard hitting, as your work often isβ¦but necessary. especially haunting was the imagery of feeling perfect because weβre not being seen.
I try not to hold my punches too much when I write π thank you Eugenia !
1. Quoting myself: "Yay self-awareness!"
2. Heheh tip.
3. For some reason I remembered a character from a book who goes to museums and temples only to utterly destroy every divine portrayal of herself (won't say more on that) ... this museum you oft mention now feels like a rage room to me. One where you would only want a sledgehammer and the freedom to tear it all down
4. Most impressive Marie, and you got me feeling some revulsion towards the narrator.. damn!
That disgusting inner voice, huh ? So intrigued by this book though ?? Thanks mon ami π«Άπ»
One of the most active inner voices yeah
This is beautiful Marie! It feels like a subtle dig at the wellness and βself careβ industry. Or perhaps thatβs just my lens. Itβs haunting and true for so many people on this journey. Thank you for this! ππΎπ€
I like that perspective, it could totally be that ! Thank you for reading me Emmy, glad to have you back π
Itβs good to be back! Looking forward to more reads!
Mustard does not curse often but gosh dang.
Ha ! I appreciate you, cursing Mustard π
holy shit π "here you sit, pretty and passive, a ghost in the machine, a void wearing the face of a woman" godDAMN
Thanks for always being so supportive Aline π«Άπ»
"bending over backwards until you disappear to belong". This line hit too hardπ.
Thank you, thank you π
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