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your writing gets more impressive each time i read it, the images become alive in my head as if i'm witnessing them myself. beautiful as always <3

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

Thank you very much ! That's very kind of you to say, because I do hope it evolves for the better every time I publish something new 🥲❤️

𝙽𝚒𝚌𝚑𝚘𝚕𝚊𝚜 𝚆𝚊𝚛𝚛𝚎𝚗's avatar

Beautiful written and reflective; it really did feel like walking through a dream 🖤

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

Aw thank you Nicholas ! I appreciate you reading me 🥰

𝙽𝚒𝚌𝚑𝚘𝚕𝚊𝚜 𝚆𝚊𝚛𝚛𝚎𝚗's avatar

Absolutely! I’ve been lacking a lot recently with a lot of my favs (lots of moving nonsense is finally over), so if you have any favs of yours you really like as of late, I’d love to check them out :)

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

Honestly I'd rather let you discover what you want and go towards what speaks to you (if anything does of course) ☺️

𝙽𝚒𝚌𝚑𝚘𝚕𝚊𝚜 𝚆𝚊𝚛𝚛𝚎𝚗's avatar

Very well! 😌 (things certainly will)

may | مي's avatar

I was so sad when it ended. I was so immersed I wanted more😭.

you write in such a unique and captivating way. Every line is absolute art!!!

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

That's a better compliment than you know !!! Writing something that makes people want more is as good as it gets honestly 😭🫶🏻

MackaroniArt's avatar

So beautiful and I relate to every word

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

Thank youuuu lovely Mackaroniiiii 😌❤️

MackaroniArt's avatar

your welcome lovely Marieeeee

𝄢 Juan José's avatar

You are the queen of evocative imagery. It is such a pleasure to read you dear Marie, you're definitely one of my favorite authors ... or artists? This is art: Fascinating, relatable, you take us through a small trip that feels like the waking memory of a dream.

I also enjoyed the dividing roses, they bring the whole thing together quite nicely

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

I'll take both so long as I'm a favorite 😏 I love love love your comments, always a treat ! ❤️

Rion Ashley's avatar

Gorgeous writing, Marie! I loved the way the story went from looking outside to looking in.

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

I always have a happy little giggle when someone notices the details like this 🤭 thanks for paying attention ! ❤️

Gigi- The Adam Trask Project's avatar

these feels like such a fresh take on your voice! i read it with a wistful tone in my head. really beautiful, marie

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

Aaaah, that is so so satisfying to read ! It pays to try new things, very grateful for your comment dear Gigi ! 🥰

adeline's avatar

i just adore the rich imagery here! your writing style always draws the reader in, but this piece has this cinematic feel to it that makes it even more immersive. and don’t even get me started how relatable it is. all in all, a truly remarkable work!!

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

Thank you very very much Adeline 🫶🏻

Fiona🌻's avatar

i really like the structure of this, but also i really feel the two quotes i restacked. i love reading you, because it feels like having my heart being taken through words and sentences, with some of them gently poking at it in a way that says "hey, you're not alone in your feelings". thank you marie for sharing these experiences and feelings with us <3

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

It's a pleasure, Fiona ! Thank you for reading ! 😄❤️

Fiona🌻's avatar

Of course 🫶🏻

aline ✨'s avatar

you've capture the emotion so well omg 😮 your writing is beautiful 😍

diana's avatar

loved this marie rose!! your way of writing is enchanting ♥️

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

I'm glad you did Diana ! Thanks a lot 😄🫶🏻

caroline cherry's avatar

far too relatable how dare u

𝑒𝓂𝓂𝒶 𝑔𝓇𝒶𝒸𝑒 🐞⋆˚꩜'s avatar

love the structure of this! beautiful image filled work marie!! ♥️

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

wow. this piece is brilliantly done. i really like the structure of it, especially the first part, where the speaker dreams of her own state of being.

𝕸𝖆𝖗𝖎𝖊 𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊 ❦'s avatar

I wanted to try something a little different, structure wise ! I'm glad it worked. I really like the first part too ! Thank you !!! 😄